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Appearance and Style - (Out of 20)

The style is great. Most of the attention is drawn to your actual posts and not the background like I’ve noticed some blogs are like. The ad that’s in your header does draw more attention to my eye than anything else though, more than your posts. It was the first thing I looked at. It’s more noticeable than your banner which is not good at all. I like your rotator displaying recent content. It’s a lot faster than scrolling down the page to find an article to read. Just an idea, it’s not going to hurt your score or anything, but I think you should change your accounts display name when writing posts. Seeing admin doesn’t mean a whole lot and it actually kind of boring. Change it to something more appealing.
(Scored 18/20)

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Blog Layout and Categorization - (Out of 20)

Your blog layout is great. It’s easy to find different articles even though there are only 5 now. I also like the categories that you have because that will help find specific posts a lot better once you actually start writing posts that go into the other categories.
(Scored 20/20)

esnt3o.webp Commenting Activity and Other Interactions - (Out of 20)
You don’t have any comments on any of your posts. That’s not good. Try adding a little something extra into your blog posts that would make people want to comment on them. From what I can tell, you don’t have anyone that reads your blog because of the fact that there’s nothing to prove it. Seeing as your blog has just opened, I wouldn’t expect much here yet, but I feel like you should be getting more readers soon.
(Scored 0/20)

2nrlyjk.webp Quality and Frequency of Posts - (Out of 20)
Personally I think that your posts are good. The one down side as I said above is that there’s not much to say about them when leaving a comment. Your blog has been open officially for 11 days, and you have 5 posts with the first one coming on February 1. If you go from the day you said it opened, the frequency of posts are pretty good as it feels like you try to get at least 1 post every other day. Most people aren’t going to know that you opened on January 29 and will think you made your first post on the day you opened which was February 1. That makes it seem like you are writing blog posts more frequently.
(Scored 17/20)

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Spelling/Grammar - (Out of 20)

In your blog posts, you need to remember to use apostrophe’s when appropriate, I noticed you never use them. You also need to remember to capitalize all proper nouns such as ‘I’, ‘Facebook’, ‘Google’, and other company names. “You are” is changed to “you’re” and not “your”. So, your only problems that I noticed are capitalization of proper nouns and use of apostrophes. Once you get those down, you’ll be good to go.
(Scored 14/20)
Total Score - 69/100


Final Remarks:
Just promote your blog. I really like your posts and I think if you promote more, you’ll get more readers.
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What was most liked about the blog:

The posts and the rotator at the top. The posts are all interesting to read.
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What was disliked most about the blog:

The fact that the ad draws more attention than anything else and that you don’t really have any comments yet.

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Many thanks for the great review,
I removed the ad, changed my display name and corrected my embarrassing grammar mistakes. 😳
Thanks again for spotting all those problems.

Sorry for being greedy but do you think the blog looks a bit plain/dull without the top ad? Its probably just me, but it looks like it's lacking something in the top right. Then again thats all I'm looking at 🙂

Thanks again for the help,
 
It does seem a little dull, but either try making your banner bigger or make a transparent ad or something that won't draw so much attention. Or maybe try one that's a little bit lighter colored.

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