New Female Vlogger! Opinions/criticism?

[meowjenna]

hello!! my name is jenna and i've started a youtube channel. this is my second vlog! please tell me any opinions/criticism you have for me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RBrE0AMRDNM

 

[Shole]

Interesting, but the sound seems like you are too far away or something is covering the mic. It just sounds strange, maybe try to fix that, other than that I have no comments.

 

[Vulture01]

I Loved your Vlog its really really good, which is why its hard to find a flaw but i guess the only thing i find odd is your camera angle. Try working that out . :yes:

Ps - I really liked your voice.