Re: Requesting Blog Review for ~tss~
Appearance and Style - (Out of 20)
OK I will be perfectly honest here, your style of the blog looks like a slap together job, a piece of this here and a piece of that there. You could say it’s like you got cheese mixed with breakfast cereal, your sites banner doesn’t really suit the rest of the site. I would recommend getting a new one something to suite your blog and what it covers, not just a nice looking picture. Minus that your site is really white, and frankly boring, looks I don’t want to be mean, but I believe in being blunt and not sending you round the rose garden 20 times.
(Scored 6/20)
Blog Layout and Categorization - (Out of 20)
Your blog layout is ok, nothing that stands out, but at the same time nothing that doesn’t do the job. It’s strait forward and to the point, and is not very hard to navigate. As for what your blog offers, you got music and manga, that’s a fairly odd combination. I honestly don’t know if that is a good thing or a bad thing, on the one hand it is good verity. But it could show a lack of organization, so instead of sitting here pulling my hair out I will go halfway with this.
(Scored 13/20)
Commenting Activity and Other Interactions - (Out of 20)
Plenty to do on the blog, with voting and feedback sections, plus the fact we get to know a little on you makes it all that more personal. With your blogs replay system getting some very good feedback, nearly 100, and that’s pretty good for a small little blog.
(Scored 18/20)
Quality and Frequency of Posts - (Out of 20)
Ok you’re of to a flying start with your posts, they are rather short for what would be normal blog size posts. Try adding some more depth to them a bit, and explain things in more detail. For example don’t just say this manga is good to read, state why you liked it and probably why someone else would want to read it. Remember when blogging you want to tell others about your items, not just tell yourself about them, that is what a diary is for.
(Scored 11/20)
Spelling/Grammar - (Out of 20)
Ok I don’t know how to put this any other way then this, please proof read your own work. Not only is there so many spelling mistakes I had to check it myself just to read it, you also got no idea of how grammar works. You don’t capital the start of your sentences, and you put things like comers and full stops all over the place. I suggest you at least copy your stuff into a word document and run a spell check on in, least that will clear up plenty of the mistakes.
(Scored 0/20)
Total Score - (48 of 100)
Final Remarks:
Your blog could use a bucket load of work, but your ideas are in the right place.
What was most liked about the blog:
The level of activity.
What was disliked most about the blog:
The spelling and grammar
How could I get you (The Reviewer) to read my blog?
Not a fan of manga and any blog I have to spell check myself, is not worth reading sorry mate.
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