3 raps i wrote today
- Thread starter BR3W3R
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I think you really should have censored out your language or used a spoiler. We don't allow excessive swearing.
Lee Lawson
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What I think they should be.
So stop with all this stuff
before things get tuff
because this shits been going on for long enough
so just sit back and enjoy
play with your toy
as i spit this flow
to your f*ckin hoes
I may not be all alone
but i dont use a differ' tone
i just need to be shown
how to be do it on your own
when your gone and away
it may not be today
but it could happen one day.
So stop with all this stuff
before things get tuff
because this shits been going on for long enough
so just sit back and enjoy
play with your toy
as i spit this flow
to your f*ckin hoes
I may not be all alone
but i dont use a differ' tone
i just need to be shown
how to be do it on your own
when your gone and away
it may not be today
but it could happen one day.
I think using excessive amounts of swearing and trying to sound "gansta" doesn't make you sound cool or qualify as real music but rather makes you sound like an ignorant kid trying to show off how cool you are and your musical talent, something that you don't have yet.
Song writing, even rapping, takes time to master. Filling it with swearing isn't making it better. Be unique, don't rap about prostitutes, your awesome rapping and your member but things that perhaps actually matter
Song writing, even rapping, takes time to master. Filling it with swearing isn't making it better. Be unique, don't rap about prostitutes, your awesome rapping and your member but things that perhaps actually matter
So Your saying that ur friend used your computer to get on FP at school/BR3W3R said:
Basically what your doing is making yourself look like a fool/
Stop lying and take it like a man/
because when you try to be a real rapper you wont even have 1 single fan/
Cussing is not cool, you just sound like a wannabe/
Rap about the real things thats where you ought to be/
Rapping about hoes will get you nothing but foes/
Being real is really how it goes/
no dude i have a douche friend named mike he sits right next to me in my drafting class and i left for the class to get my retainers fixed, i forgot to logout he knew i was a fan of this site and tryed to make me look like a fool... so im sorry.
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