A screen shot of my new style for a project im working on
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Re: A screen shot of my new style for a project im working o
It looks very awesome! With that I mean like one of those big company business templates
It looks very awesome! With that I mean like one of those big company business templates
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Re: A screen shot of my new style for a project im working o
In the bulleted list, on the last list entry, the word "the" looks like this --> "THe". Aside from that, it looks great. (sorry, that's my OCD side taking over 😛)
In the bulleted list, on the last list entry, the word "the" looks like this --> "THe". Aside from that, it looks great. (sorry, that's my OCD side taking over 😛)
Re: A screen shot of my new style for a project im working o
What is meant when you say "quick, medium, larger"? You should do them by the suggested time if given, if not, then by how many steps. When does quick become medium, and when does medium become larger. Also, the use of "larger" is a comparative word. Medium is larger than small, so that doesn't really make sense.
What is meant when you say "quick, medium, larger"? You should do them by the suggested time if given, if not, then by how many steps. When does quick become medium, and when does medium become larger. Also, the use of "larger" is a comparative word. Medium is larger than small, so that doesn't really make sense.
Re: A screen shot of my new style for a project im working o
I like the style mate. I think the English on the descriptions really needs some work though. Maybe get somebody to proofread your work. The colors seem nice.
The text, 'What is your prices?' could probably be moved down a little more, and again the English in that sentence alone is pretty bad.
I like the style mate. I think the English on the descriptions really needs some work though. Maybe get somebody to proofread your work. The colors seem nice.
The text, 'What is your prices?' could probably be moved down a little more, and again the English in that sentence alone is pretty bad.
Re: A screen shot of my new style for a project im working o
Design wise is not aesthetically pleasing. The background is "different", and with that baby/light blue, it makes the whole design dull. The main banner seems to be a quick fix. There really isn't any structure to it so I'd suggest you make it stronger, and more dominant in the design. Without seeing the whole thing, it's hard to tell why you have it on an angle. Nothing else is on an angle, so design wise, it lacks unity though the design.
If you push the information booth section inwards, so it doesn't stick out, then it'd be much better, but again, if there is something below that, then it may work if you stick to that idea.
Overall, it needs much more work before it can be coded or what ever is being done with it. This is coming from a design point of view.
How was that pointless? If you only wanted things on design, then say so:paine said:
Wow, that definitely implies just one certain thing :roll:
Design wise is not aesthetically pleasing. The background is "different", and with that baby/light blue, it makes the whole design dull. The main banner seems to be a quick fix. There really isn't any structure to it so I'd suggest you make it stronger, and more dominant in the design. Without seeing the whole thing, it's hard to tell why you have it on an angle. Nothing else is on an angle, so design wise, it lacks unity though the design.
If you push the information booth section inwards, so it doesn't stick out, then it'd be much better, but again, if there is something below that, then it may work if you stick to that idea.
Overall, it needs much more work before it can be coded or what ever is being done with it. This is coming from a design point of view.
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