Adding Review Section to my forum help needed

[Scarface]

Hi i want to add review section to my tech forum, below is what i came up with, please correct the grammar if there's any mistakes and also if you could come up with better review system then what i have below i would appreciate if you could share that too.. thanks...



Greetings, Everyone! Please Leave your Reviews on the devices that you own or have previously owned, as your reviews are very important. They will also help other members to benefit from it.
Please Leave reviews in the order given below. Rate your item in terms of
Value, Features and Performance in best of 5.
Name of Device:
Model:
Year of Purchase:
Value Rating:
Features Rating:
Performance Rating:
Comments:



Thank You for taking the time in leaving reviews of the devices that you own.

 

[LunarScorpio]

Moved to a more suitable forum. 🙂

 

[Ashley]

Looks decent to me really. I'm no good at spelling/grammar reviews so I wouldn't be one to count on to correct mistakes. Looks good otherwise.

 

[E07.NET]

This is a good idea to generate content for your forum and they would be commercial too.

 

[Scarface]

Looks decent to me really. I'm no good at spelling/grammar reviews so I wouldn't be one to count on to correct mistakes. Looks good otherwise.

thanks smitty<br /><br />-- 19 Feb 2013, 21:14 --<br /><br />

This is a good idea to generate content for your forum and they would be commercial too.

thanks e07, yup thats what i have in mind commercial... well spoted

 

[Patrick W.]

Greetings, everyone! Please leave your reviews on devices that you currently own or have previously owned, as your reviews are very important. They will help other members decide on a device from your past or current experiences.

Please Leave reviews in the order given below. Rate your item in terms of
Value, Features and Performance in best of 5.

Name of Device:
Model:
Year of Purchase:
Value Rating:
Features Rating:
Performance Rating:
Comments:



Thank You for taking the time in leaving a review. {Maybe offer some incentive, maybe forum currency if you have some or something else, be creative to get members wanting to post reviews}

I rephrased the last sentence of the first paragraph and removed the unneeded capital letters. I would also suggest adding a description of what each of the ratings are. For example, I am not sure what "Value Rating" would cover.

 

[Scarface]

Greetings, everyone! Please leave your reviews on devices that you currently own or have previously owned, as your reviews are very important. They will help other members decide on a device from your past or current experiences.

Please Leave reviews in the order given below. Rate your item in terms of
Value, Features and Performance in best of 5.

Name of Device:
Model:
Year of Purchase:
Value Rating:
Features Rating:
Performance Rating:
Comments:



Thank You for taking the time in leaving a review. {Maybe offer some incentive, maybe forum currency if you have some or something else, be creative to get members wanting to post reviews}

I rephrased the last sentence of the first paragraph and removed the unneeded capital letters. I would also suggest adding a description of what each of the ratings are. For example, I am not sure what "Value Rating" would cover.

Thanks Patrick for editing it helps a lot, as for value rating thats basically whether the item is good for its value or not?