Blog review

Naiwen

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Name of Forum:My reviews and ramblings
Forum Link: in my sig
Type of Review ( Quick Review / Forum Review / Blog Review ): blog review
Date Forum Opened: july 10th
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Additional Notes:thank you, please do not say that I need a domain, thank you, it's a personal thing. please mainly comment on the content and the theme. I'm having a hard time choosing one. I'm not decided on the theme yet so don't be surprised if I change it.
 
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Appearance and Style - (Out of 20)

Yesterday when I looked on your forum I saw that you had a different one from today’s, and I think that you made the right choice of changing it as the other one had a nice background but it was awfully hard to read the text of your posts. Moving on to your new forum, you have a premade skin, which is quite nice and I think it resembles a diary and it suits your theme and genre quite nicely. Maybe in the near future you could get a custom skin, if your member base increase and grows larger, but for nine its fine. I would have liked to see a banner or some kind of logo to personalize the blog a bit more. For your next update I would like to see this introduced. I think you could maybe use a bit more color in your posts, for example maybe use the title in a different color or maybe use some bold in your posts.
(Scored 14/20)

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Blog Layout and Categorization - (Out of 20)

Your layout seems to be pretty good and you have a Home and an about button, but you should probably add an contact us button as well, it probably won’t be used that much but it is just a professional and friendly kind of a thing, that will keep guests happy. Your categorization seems to be pretty good, just remember that you need to keep putting your posts into the right categories, and make sure you add posts to the categories as well, don’t just leave the category with only one post.
(Scored 18/20)

esnt3o.webp Commenting Activity and Other Interactions - (Out of 20)
Your activity on your blog is very good, and I checked that all the posts had the same posters posting and you weren’t just paying them to post comments, a lot of them are the same and the posters are leaving large comments and really interacting with the post you have made and giving feedback and are also creating discussions, which is turning into nice little community, and it looks really nice. This is a great achievement for only being opened for four days. There is not much I can say on how to improve, because you are already doing a very good job, keep up the good work and don’t stop advertising.
(Scored 19/20)

2nrlyjk.webp Quality and Frequency of Posts - (Out of 20)
You have posted every single day, except for today but I am sure you will get around to doing it today. Your posts are long and descriptive and you audience seems to been enjoying them as well. You need to make sure you keep up posting articles every day or every second day as your members seem to be expecting that, and you have to make sure that your articles are interesting as well, even let some of your members maybe posting some of their own articles as well just to let you have a break from writing.
(Scored 19/20)

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Spelling/Grammar - (Out of 20)

You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes, make sure you proof read and spell check it. “eruptions” should be eruptions, “drynesses” should be dryness, some of your sentences do not make a lot of sense such as “Atlanteans, maybe or maybe not. An intelligent species.” You so not really need to use a full stop in the middle of that sentence as well a comma should be fine. “I’m the kinda person who loves action films. “ You should have said “ I’m the kind of personwho loves action films”.
(Scored 14/20)
Total Score 84(Out of 100)


Final Remarks:

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What was most liked about the blog:

The activity and the posts.
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What was disliked most about the blog:

Spelling and grammar and lack of a banner and custom skin.
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thank you, but I lack the skills to design a custom theme myself and I don't want to spend money. I haven't gotten around wordpress yet, so I don't know how to play with colors and all that. And since it's a diary, I'm not really too much of a grammar guru. XD But thanks for pointing out my mistakes. Plus what do you mean by member base? I don't have a forum, might I remind you.
 
I should have said reader base or guest base instead of member base, just so used to reviewing forums, this is my first blog review. Hope you enjoyed your review.

Thanks
Lorcan
 
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