Brawl Domain

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Name of Forum: Brawl Domain
Forum Link: http://www.brawldomain.com
Type of Review ( Quick Review / Forum Review ): Forum Review
Date Forum Opened: April 13th, 2008
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Wanted to wait until a few reviews got cleared out before requesting. I haven't had a review from here in about 6 months. But just added a brand new skin and a few new boards, and would like to see how the rest of the forum has been shaping up.
 
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First Impressions & Appearance - (Out of 20)
Wow! Your banner and buttons at the top of the page are simply amazing. However, your header is very huge! Is there any way you can move everything below your navigation buttons and above where your categories and forums begin to a separate portal? It's very awkward to have to scroll down so far to view your forums. Other than the huge header, though, I love your theme! It suits your site very well, and it has a lot of eye appeal.

Getting away from aesthetics, you don't have any empty forums. Your statistics also look very impressive at a glance; you have had fifty-nine members connect within the past twenty-four hours! That's incredible!

Overall, my first impression of your site was very positive.
(Scored 19/20)

Site Layout - (Out of 20)
Your index is extremely long! It's not completely because of your layout, though; the header also contributes to the length of your index. The length of your index may make it slightly difficult for users to navigate your forum. Although the length of your index is justified for the most part, I can still see a few things you can do to condense it. Firstly, since the "Forum Rules, Staff Team, and Important Notices!" forum only has nine topics, I believe that it could be combined with the "Announcements within the Domain!" forum. Secondly, I think that having a category dedicated solely to the "Brawl Clan Announcements!" forum is a bit unnecessary. Since there is only one forum for the clan, I think that you could move it to the "Brawl! The Hype of the Game!" category. I also think that your "Brawl Domain Tournaments" category is unnecessary; I think those forums could be moved to "Let's Get Ready To Rumble!" Furthermore, I think that the "Domain's Oasis" category is redundant; I would move all of those forums to the "Take a Break from the BRAWL!" category (except for the "Domain Interrogations" forum; I would make this a sub-forum under "Challenger Approaching ... !"). These are just a few suggestions; if you can find any other ways to condense your index, I would definitely recommend it.
(Scored 12/20)

Statistics and Activity - (Out of 20)
According to my calculations, your forum is receiving an average of nearly one hundred and twenty-five posts per day, and you have seventy-five posts to each of your nine hundred and forty-five members. These statistics are fantastic, but don't get lazy now! You need to keep advertising through various means in order to keep your community strong. What you are doing really appears to be working, so keep on doing it. If you haven't already, I would recommend sending mass e-mails to all of your users to let them know that your site is still alive and strong. It's easy for members to forget about a site in over a year and a half. At this point, I would assume that your site is also advertising itself; members are most likely bringing their friends. Overall, though, your activity is fantastic. I hope that your forum continues to improve in this area.
(Scored 20/20)

Staff Moderation - (Out of 20)
Your forum currently employs one administrator and five moderators according to your announcement. All of these staff members appear to be very active on your forum. That's great! It's always comforting to members to know that active members are policing the community. Your moderators also appear to do a very good job of welcoming new members to the community. Overall, I think that your staff members are very commendable. I don't see any staffing issues whatsoever!
(Scored 20/20)

Spelling/Grammar & Professionalism - (Out of 20)
Your descriptions are extremely well done. They really make your forums sound interesting, and they reflect the amount of effort you've put into your forum. Anybody who reads your descriptions is probably just as amazed as I am with how much effort you seem to have put into them. However, there are many grammatical errors in your descriptions. Just in the description of your top forum, I see seven capitalization errors and several errors in punctuation, sentence structure, and spelling. I would definitely recommend proofreading your forum's descriptions for errors to see if you can spot any. Remember that you only need to capitalize proper nouns in the middle of a sentence (e.g. "Brawl Domain, Brawl, Domain, et cetera). You also seem to have some sentence fragments in your descriptions (a prepositional phrase is not a complete sentence, for example). If you have any questions regarding grammar rules or just want me to help you correct your descriptions, feel free to drop me a PM (I'm a grammar nerd). I think that correcting the grammatical errors on your forum would definitely make it look more professional and attractive to prospective members.
(Scored 13/20)

Score - 84 (Out of 100)


Closing remarks: Your forum is great, but I think that it could be made even better with some minor changes.

Forum's strong points: Your forum's theme, activity, and staff are all amazing!

Improvements to make: Your layout needs to be improved a bit, and some grammatical errors need to be fixed on your index.


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Don't take this the wrong at all ... but I am glad FP does have a more stricter reviewer on the team. some really good things you pointed out I don't think I would of gotten from anyone else.

About the Caps in descriptions. I use Caps in some important words, or topic of discussion within the board, to stress how important they are, ie, Staff Team, Forum Rules, etc. That's just my style on that.

The news box, it's a member favorite. The video really gets members pumped when their match gets displayed on the main page, and it helps encourage more members to upload and post their matches. Now, I definitely could downsize it by half, take out those 3 affiliate buttons, since they're no longer necessary to be there. And tweak the rest of the box up a bit.

And, about the excessive boards & categories. My forum is very different from others. Most of my members who join are not forum "goers". They googled looking for something about the game, Brawl, and found us. So, I have to make it as easy to navigate as possible. Having too many sub-boards does get confusing for those who aren't too fluent with forums.

And, the Clan does have 4 sub-boards, we just created that about 4 days ago and started one up, and it's already a popular section. It does have to be on it's own. As well as Power Rankings and Tournaments ... cause they're more organized in they're own section. We get a bout 2-3 tournaments going a week, and they're very popular.

Thanx for the great review Snobo! Much Appreciated 🙂
 
Thanks for the feedback, HCF. I do tend to be a little tougher than the other reviewers. It's not to be mean, though; it's because I want to see forums actually improve. If you give a forum a great score on their very first review, they're not going to bother to improve anything. Believe it or not, your score is the highest I've given so far.
 
Sorry I just have to comment on your post.
So no matter how good a forum is, you wont give them a high score?
 
Claritty said:
Sorry I just have to comment on your post.
So no matter how good a forum is, you wont give them a high score?
I will give a high score (in the nineties) if I feel the forum performs extremely well in all the areas I evaluate. While HCF has a wonderful forum, there are some things I feel prospective members might not like about his site.
 
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