Can someone tell me how this sounds?

[i-framed-vader]

So I recently started my roleplaying forum,roleplaycivivian.com , I was trying to advertise for it, I found some sites but im having a hard time writing a actual ad for it, I was wondering if anyone would be able to help, this is what I wrote but I am not sure how it sounds, what do you guys think, any suggestions, it just doen't sound right to me and i'm not sure why :/

Hello, I’m i-framed-vader, Mikayla, the owner of Roleplay Civivian. We are a newly founded roleplaying forum prided in keeping our forum a safe, and fun place for our members to be at all times. We cover all genres of roleplaying, and keep an open mind to plots as long as they stay PG13 on the public boards 🙂 Ranging from slice of life to Horror to Sci-fi and all more. We also let people do fan based roleplays of course, and have a warrior cats board set as well. We look for members of skill from one liners to advanced roleplay and novella.

We recently underwent a large remodelling and lost quite a bit of our information in the process, but we also gained a lot of security in doing so, and after a bit of work and some trial and error, are now accepting new members and actively looking for them! So feel free to come check us out, post in the welcoming boards, introduce yourself and feel free to ask any questions!!!

We look forward to meeting you!




But idk to me it sounds not right what do you guys think?

 

[Reverie]

When you describe your community you should write kind of about how it is different from other forums in the same genre. Since there are many RP forums sometimes that's not easily done! 🙂

So maybe I can suggest -

"We are a newly founded roleplaying forum! Our community covers all genres of roleplaying as long as they stay PG-13. So anything ranging from Fan based roleplay, to every day life is completely accepted and wanted!

We are currently innovating our forum, and would love new and different members to actively bring a fresh new look to what Roleplay Civian can really be! So feel free to come check us out, post around, introduce yourself and feel free to ask any questions!!

We look forward to meeting you!"

Basically making it basic but welcoming! 🙂 Yours looks great too though, stick with it if you think it's best!

 

[i-framed-vader]

No I like that it sounds really good! I'm not great at stuff like this honestly so I really appreciate the inut, thanks so much 🙂