Derailed (My latest song)

[SettledHate.]

Derailed

[Part One]:

Things have derailed in my life...
Everyone fails at times...
But this is a constant process nailed in my mind...
Nearly headed to jail for life...
My depressed thoughts expressed when I nail my rhymes...
The next best interest I have is death...
Wait, f**k those emotional steps...
Accept who I am, the blood flowing through my flesh...
So I show I know who's best, I don't coincide with death...
Never forget the man I plan to stand tall for...
And order a man to sever the lands lords...
But then again, isn't that what my fans are for?...
You only got one life, cherish it, or else everythings gone...

[Hook]:

I have derailed off the track...
My life - I want it back...
Drugs and stupidity...
Now look what it did to me...
I guess I should express my thoughts through lyrics...
Get myself back on track and leave behind all this mess...
Because all its brought is s**t...
So listen to this...
My bad life I shall forever rid...
This I admit is one of my true promises...

[Part Two]:

So I flee the path I've chosen in the past...
So sick of being last...
Sometimes I hope to cross the road and SMASH...
A car crash, bashed to where my heads at...
Have my neck snapped...
Legs battered to pulp...
But then my thoughts turn to my folks...
I needa straighten out my life...
No more drugs, no more fights...
Lifes messy for me day and night...
Lord Bless me tonight, I want to be better and be nice...
I'm willing to do this, though it will be a hike...​

 

[Jonathan]

Well... it's a bit cheesy? I'm willing to do this, though it will be a hike. But hmmm... nicely expressed. Buy a mic, mac and Logic Pro. Get it recorded 😀

 

[Uphoreka]

Is this a rap? The lyrics are okay. Like Donkey said, it's a bit cheesy.

 

[MissTake]

I admire it, it's a brilliant way to distract yourself, it's therapy and it's an excellent way to earn a living if you are any good at it.

Don't take this to be patronising but it takes a certain type of person to turn things around and find an outlet for handling bad situations. Good on you, it's deep. 😉

 

[Lee Lawson]

Honestly, music is nothing without a beat/rythmn or sound.

 

[Kino]

Nice work as always Settled 🙂

 

[SettledHate.]

Cheers for that.

And as always, I do in fact record it (it's just a matter of getting a new microphone)

The instrumental beat you will love, too. 😉

 

[Justin]

Honestly, music is nothing without a beat/rythmn or sound.

That.. uh no. Music was (originally) a way to express feelings. Though these new rap groups are taking that out of music.

 

[Nathan]

It's not bad, although it's better then anything I can do so I can't say it's shit 😉

Good job mate :great:

 

[SettledHate.]

Cheers for that =]