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First Impressions & Appearance - (Out of 20)
I’d like to compliment you right from the start - for a ForuMotion forum, your forum manages not to look generic. I cannot tell you how many generic ForuMotion forums I’ve seen that look the same, and your skin is a pleasant surprise. Another good thing is your banner, it’s really nice looking. Your banner is really nice and fits your theme well.
Next, nothing was difficult to read or understand, which I really liked. Also your affiliate bar is very unintrusive which I really liked. The only minor thing I noticed is that your index’s read/unread images are not transparent, so on the key they appear out of place. Make those transparent and it would be pretty much perfect.
(Scored 19/20)

Site Layout - (Out of 20)
You’ve got your site physically layed out well. All the forums are categorized correctly from what I see, and your affiliate bar is placed in a location that makes it not intrusive but still effective. Unfortunately, a problem that your forum is that your forum is about DA, yet a lot of your forums don’t even deal with DA. You have about as many off-topic boards as boards about DA, plus then you’ve got site-related boards. I’d keep the off-topic boards to a minimal if I were you. Other than that though, everything else was fine.

(Scored 15/20)

Statistics and Activity - (Out of 20)
You’re forum’s been open a little over a week. There’s no fair way for me to grade you in this area. You’re advertising on FP so it’s obvious you care about your forum’s activity. Next time you request a review this are should be able to be assessed more completely.

(Scored 20/20)

Staff Moderation - (Out of 20)
Yikes! You’ve got an admin, two global mods, and two regular mods. That’s a total of 5. You have 16 members, meaning roughly 1/3 of your members are staff! That’s way too much and extremely overkill for your forum. There is no way your forum needs 5 moderators, it’s too young to need that many. Many large forums don’t even have that. I would strongly suggest stop hiring for a while. The plus side is that your forum at least seems to be spam free.

(Scored 5/20)

Spelling/Grammar & Professionalism - (Out of 20)
Literally, every single forum has a spelling/grammar error, most of them are minor and a lot are lack of periods, but I’ll still go ahead and point them all out.

“All announcements and rules are found here, please read frequently” should be, “All announcements and rules are found here. Please read frequently.”
“Have a suggestion or want to give feedback? or even need help? this is the place” should be, “Have a suggestion or want to give feedback, or even need help? This is the place.”
“New to site? introduce yourself here” should be, “New to the site? Introduce yourself here.”
“Need help with DragonAdopters? ask here” should be, “Need help with DragonAdopters? Ask here.”
“Discuss dragon-types, dragons and anything else related to Dragon Adopters” should be, “Discuss dragon-types, dragons, and anything else related to Dragon Adopters.”
“Discuss on what Dragon Adopters should add later” should be, “Discuss on what Dragon Adopters should add later.”
“99% of your questions are answered here... you don't need to wait...” should be, “99% of your questions are answered here, you don't need to wait.”
“Advertise your dragon, but please read guidelines first” should be, “Advertise your dragon, but please read the guidelines first.”
“Exchange for clicks, resources, items or anything else that can be exchanged in Dragon Adopters” should be, “Exchange for clicks, resources, items, or anything else that can be exchanged in Dragon Adopters.”
“Show of your graphics here, but you can't request” should be, “Show off your graphics here, but you can't request them.”
“Share poems made by you, role play or share stories” should be, “Share poems made by you, role play, or share stories.”
“Participate in contests here and you can win prizes” should be, “Participate in contests here and, you can win prizes.”
“Advertise your site here, but please read guidelines first” should be, “Advertise your site here, but please read the guidelines first.”
“Discuss and chat about anything here and play forum games” should be, “Discuss and chat about anything here, and play forum games.”
“Discuss about TV shows, bands, sports and any type of entertainment” should be, “Discuss about TV shows, bands, sports, and any type of entertainment.”
“Discuss and science and world of technology, from universe to computers” should be, “Discuss and science and world of technology, from universe to computers.”
“Discuss about Dragon Cave” should be, “Discuss topics about Dragon Cave.”
“The trash can” should be, “Here is the trash can.”

As far as professionalism goes, your forum is fine except for the spelling, which is the only thing making it unprofessional.

(Scored 8/20)

Total Score - 67 (Out of 100)


Final Remarks: Your forum shows major potential.

What was most liked about the website/forums: The look, the layout.

What was disliked most about the website/forums: Nothing except the spelling.

How could I get you (The Reviewer) to join my website? Sorry, I am not really into what your forum is about.


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