Feedback on ad copy please?

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I use the post below to promote and sell advertising slots on my business forum. Would you please have any suggestions for improving the ad?

Thanks!

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Definitely some raw Google Analytics statistics and screenshots. You will also want to mention demographics (age group, major countries) as some advertisers want to target a certain audience and if your site does that, they will definitely want to advertise there.
 
Thanks David, those suggestions are helpful and I will see how I can work some of them into the ad.

Anyone else?
 
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