Feedback on my blog

[Geoffrey]

I've recently been redoing my blog, putting a focus on posting genuine content and improving my writing style. Of course, I've also put a bit of time into the design and look of the site.

http://geoffreykoester.com

 

[Red Herring]

I've recently been redoing my blog, putting a focus on posting genuine content and improving my writing style. Of course, I've also put a bit of time into the design and look of the site.

http://geoffreykoester.com

I went ahead and made a quick little analysis. Read a couple articles and skimmed over others. Your writing style has certainly improved from The College Blog; articles are generally more pleasurable to read and they feel as though they have more to offer this time around (Although, granted, this blog's content is more on the "expressive" side of blogging than the more "informational" side as the College Blog was) For instance, in addition to providing a clever amusing little title, "Thanks, Obama: Why I’m No Longer an Obamacare Fan" has some lovely little points and the whole "process" was a good read. Definitely my favorite of what I read, and I believe that writing articles akin to that one (while simultaneously continuing to improve on your writing style and content) would definitely be a step in the right direction.

 

[Geoffrey]

Thanks Red, I'm glad you liked it. That post is definitely one of my more personal ones, which I would like to have more of. I like that mix of personal as well as politics that it has.

 

[Delirious]

Nice clean theme. Articles are well written and the content seems to be genuine.

I like how you add a touch of your personal life to it, it doesn't seem like something you was paid to write.

 

[Scribbler397]

I like the general layout. It is a nice theme.

Your headlines grab the readers attention and pull them into the article. Nice work!