Fix the Grammar/spelling and get 50FP

[2008paul]

I am not sure where to post this so I am sorry if it's in the wrong bit.

I just need some one to sort out the Grammar/spelling on the text I am going to post and the one who do it good will get 50FP

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The first one to post here with all the spelling/Grammar right will get 50FP as long I and other people are sure it's right.


Thanks,
Paul

 

[ViddaXondi]

I'll have a go but may miss something. Somebody else will likely be able to improve upon it better than me.

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[22_22]

Didn't need to edit much.

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[Callum93]

Hmm... @22_22, I wouldn't say that was perfect.

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Fixed. 🙂

 

[2008paul]

Okey, Now I've got to pick from you 3... Ermm any one want to tell me witch one got it right...

 

[Callum93]

I think I got it right, though ViddaXondi's seems pretty good to me as well.

 

[2008paul]

Okey, I think
ViddaXondi - 50FP
Sbfc - 50FP
22_22 - 20FP

 

[Callum93]

Ok, send the money whenever you're ready. :great:

 

[2008paul]

Sorry for slow reply bin out.
Donated to all 3.

Thanks for help guys.

 

[Relmitos]

The grammar check Sbfc gave you is close to perfect.
However, You should start a sentence and names with a capital at all times. Dots and comma's mark the end of a sentence.

Example: 'Ask for help. Give your comments, feedback, & suggestions in here.'

Should be: Ask for help. Give your comments, Feedback & suggestions here.

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