Your Quick Review
Website Pros:
First of all I really like the template you have. The colors really blend perfectly and it draws you in.
I also like the banner you have. It fits perfectly with the skin.
Your website name is also a serious pro.. It has a very nice ring to it and clearly states what your website is all about, and it's understandable to anyone who uses the internet.
The guide is also very complete and if I wanted a free domain, this would really help me out for sure. You act like your audience is a 5 year old, which is what you want to do on " HOW TO " websites.
Website Cons:
First thing I have to say is that your spelling and grammar is poor. This needs to be fixed up if you want to be taken more seriously.
Second, I think it sounds a bit too much like those silly " Do this and get 100 dollars " or " Order this berry and lose 50 pounds and get a six pack if you eat it for a week! " type of websites.
I can't really think of anything you can do but I would change work on coming up with an idea to make it sound a bit more friendlier. I think it might be helpful if you put more testimonials at the bottom. Even fake ones, write a few up yourself but use different typing styles...
Example:
" Great site, great steps, amazing results! " might be one you can use..
then you can use like this:
" The site helped me well... the whole guide was wrote in greatness and it really assist me, I have a few free domain now.. "
Fracture your English a bit in some of them, really will be useful, because the only testimonial you have now is from someone who works on your website.
Final/General Thoughts:
This site has a lot of potential.. I see this site going all over the web someday.. I'll sure as hell be referring people I know to it, but the thing is your spelling and grammar is poor and it does need a bit of work on friendliness.
I also really commend your guide. That thing is one of the most easy to follow guides on the internet, like I said before, a five year old would be able to understand it.
What was most liked about the website/forums:
I really like the theme, and the banner especially, it blends perfectly with your site, and I really,really applaud how well your guide is written.
What was disliked most about the website/forums:
The poor spelling and grammar in the guide areas... example:
" Hello, my name is Leo Ghost. Guess what, i'm a real person. I'm known for my activity on Forum Promotion and my ownership of my web network, (GWN). What i'm about to tell you isn't secret, or going to cost you anything but 5 minutes reading time. "
is a paragraph on your site.
It should look like this:
" Hello, my name is Leo Ghost. Guess what, I'm a real person! I'm known for my activity on Forum Promotion and my ownership of my web network, (GWN). What I'm about to tell you isn't secret, or going to cost you anything but five minutes of your time reading this guide. "
Final Score : Score - 9 (Out of 10)
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