Full Forum Review Request For Hogwarts

Lord Saru

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Name of Forum:Hogwarts School of Witchcraft And Wizardry
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Date Forum Opened:Thus 29th January
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First Impressions & Appearance - (Out of 20)

-Not a big fan of the portal as the homepage. There really isn't a point. The only useful widgets on the portal are the newsbar and the house points box. It's kind of annoying, doesn't look nice, and seems like an imposition when I just want to get to the forum.

-The scrolling news bar is very useful. It broadcasts news for current members, and highlights features for potential reasons.

-I like the theme. It looks pretty good. The overall look of the forum is good. However, even though I like the theme, I don't think it really fits Hogwarts as a whole. It feels kind of just like Snape's dungeon. It is just plain dark, where as Hogwarts is a bright and cheery place. I like the theme, but I am just saying if you want it to fit Hogwarts 100%, consider a change.
(Scored 17/20)

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Site Layout - (Out of 20)

-Well the portal counts on this section, and like I said before, I think it should go. It is not really that useful, and members want to get to the forum.

-I do not think that the last four forums need their own categories. They could all be condensed into one or two categories.

-Other than that, the organization of the forum is good. I wouldn't have done it any other way myself.
(Scored 17/20)

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Statistics and Activity - (Out of 20)

-Open for about 31 days
-595 posts
-36 members

-The forum averages 19 posts per day. Pretty good for a role play forum as new as this one. Keep putting in the effort and this number will rise.

-The average member has made 17 posts. This is a decent number, but it could be better. Get all your members involved in RP, making it a fun experience for everyone.
(Scored 18/20)

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Staff Moderation - (Out of 20)

-If I'm not mistaken, Albus Dumbledore has two teaching positions. He doesn't have a time turner, so he can't be in two places at once...

-From what I have read so far, the teachers and other staff are doing a great job on the forum. Your staff is great.
(Scored 19/20)

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Spelling/Grammar & Professionalism - (Out of 20)

-I will not point out every error, but you need to go back. Put a space between all periods. Do not capitalize every word in the sentence.

-Under the banner - "Welcome Aboard the Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Quills Away and Wands Out." Fixed several spelling errors.

-Dueling - This is how you spelling the word. Fix the name of the forum and the description.

-I suggest getting Firefox or Chrome, both of which spell check automatically.
(Scored 15/20)
Total Score - 86 (Out of 100)


Final Remarks: I really like the forum. I am still considering becoming a part of it.

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What was most liked about the website/forums:
The staff and content.

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What was disliked most about the website/forums:
Spelling and Grammar.

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I'm considering it, time is short these days.


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