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Appearance and Style - (Out of 20)

When a potential reader visits your blog, you want them to be pulled in right away by your blog's appearance and style. I think your blog's appearance and style is okay, but I have a few tips that will make it better, no worries. First, I am a fan of your blog's logo. It's appealing and creative, and it matches your blog's theme. Secondly, I like your favicon. It goes with the genre of the blog and it matches the logo. Thirdly, I think you should work on your blog's color scheme. I really like the blue background, I think it would look so much better having this color blue incorporated more into the color scheme. Right now, your blog reminds me of reading a newspaper honestly. It has too much black and white. I think you could work on improvising blue or orange into where the content is displayed. Overall, your blog's appearance and style is alright, there are definitely potential improvements though. Good luck making these improvements.
(Scored 16/20)

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Blog Layout and Categorization - (Out of 20)

Your blog appears to have nine categories. I feel that is the perfect amount of categories for your blog though. The categories are very general as well, so they cover just about everything. I think there should be an "Other" blog category though, just in case. There may already be one, but it isn't on the menu then, and it probably should be. I feel the blog is very unorganized still. I feel you would be okay with only one menu, instead of one above the logo and one below it. I feel you could have the top menu on the menu bar under the logo, and then get rid of the menu above the logo. That may sound unorganized, but instead of displaying all the categories on the menu like it is, you could have a "Categories" menu item. It could be a roll-over drop down menu, so when you hover your mouse of it, a drop down list of all the different categories appears. I think this could really help the blog look less cluttered. Overall, your blog layout is a bit cluttered and the categorization could be improved. Good luck making improvements.
(Scored 16/20)

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Commenting Activity and Other Interactions - (Out of 20)

Your blog seems to be actively receiving comments. The amount of comments varies per blog post, but that's natural. Sometimes readers have something to say regarding a blog post, sometimes they don't. Each blog post seems to get at least one comment. Some blog posts get more though; for example, I can see one blog post right off the bat with four comments. That's pretty good, but it could be better of course. I feel you might be able to get more comments if you encouraged comments in your blog posts. You could possibly ask a question at the ending of your blog posts, which will urge them to comment to answer your question. Commenting seems to be the only interaction going on, besides your Twitter page, which has 71 followers, great job on that. It's clear that there are other interactions going on through social networking. Overall, the commenting activity is pretty good, but there doesn't seem to be too many other reactions. Good luck.
(Scored 19/20)

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Quality and Frequency of Posts - (Out of 20)

Overall, I think the quality of the posts is pretty nice. It could be better though. I feel you could make some blog posts bigger, as some of them only include a couple sentences and a few pictures. I think each blog post should have at least a paragraph or two, maybe more. You should also check for spelling and grammar mistakes, as that can affect the quality of your blog posts. Now, regarding the frequency of posts. You seem to be making posts pretty often. You seem to create a blog post everyday, and every once in awhile, you do multiple blog posts in a day. You seem to have not made a blog post lately though, it's been a few days at least. The frequency of blog posts is good, but consistently posting one blog post a day would be better. Overall, the quality of your blog posts is decent and the frequency of your blog posts is pretty nice. I wish you the best of luck making improvements.
(Scored 16/20)

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Spelling/Grammar - (Out of 20)

You have done a pretty good job with spelling and grammar. I do see a few mistakes though. I'll point them out. First, in the "Jump Off!" blog post, "of" needs to be between "one" and "the." Secondly, in that same blog posts, "Its" needs to be "It's." Thirdly, in the "Girls Galore" blog post, "may be" needs to be "maybe." Fourthly, in the "Curious Catalogue" blog post, "time" needs to be "times." Fifthly, in the "Select Superlinks" blog post, "Here" needs to be "Her." That's all the spelling and grammar errors I could find in the few recent blog posts. So, that's obviously not all the spelling and grammar errors on your blog, but it gives you something to work with. Remember, don't forget to proofread and spell check your blog posts. Overall, spelling and grammar isn't the best, improvements should be made. Good luck!
(Scored 16/20)
Total Score - 83 (Out of 100)


Final Remarks:

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What was most liked about the blog:

The constant blog posts.
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What was disliked most about the blog:

The layout.

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How could I get you (The Reviewer) to read my blog?

By focusing a bit more on interesting content than attractive females.

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