Games Timeline Review

iMage

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Site URL: http://gamestimeline.com
Date Opened: about 3 days ago
Review Type: been updating an existing template to make it a bit more unique, still having some issues with fixing it in mobile browsers
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Games Timeline
Review by Kino


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First Impressions
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So my first impressions are pretty good. I like your style, the niche is very unique, and it just looks nice.

I don't know how you came up with the niche and at first glance I wasn't sure if I liked what you had going on. I thought to myself how the hell is this going to work. Then I thought about how I was going to tell you this might not work. But then I thought about originality and how a lot of my reviews tell people they lack original content. Man you hit this on the spot. So as a first impression, I'm super impressed.
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Excellent



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Design Quality
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I love your design. It's plain and simple and exactly what a site like yours needs. Your banner is phenomenal and classy. It really fits your niche quite nicely. I'm super impressed.

There are just a few things I noticed that I think you could maybe work on to make your site look better.
  • First, I love the big images that pop up for the "Featured Games" on the main page. It's great advertising and looks nice. However, the images are so blurry that it kind of dissuades me from wanting to click anywhere else because if the quality of the image is bad, maybe the quality of the game is bad too. Just something you could potentially fix.
  • Second, I hovered over and checked out your sections at the top (Wallpapers, Timeline Covers, etc.). One picky thing I noticed is that in the "Wallpapers" pulldown everything is nice and capitalized, except for "Game wallpapers." I think you might have just missed this. Also, on the "Timeline Covers" pull-down you also forgot to capitalize "racing." Just a couple of things. Otherwise the spelling and everything else looks nice.
  • Lastly, you have a lot of room in the blue banner at the bottom of the site where the "Contact Us", "Link Exchange", etc. lists are. I think you can really utilize this space with maybe a couple of graphics or simply just copy the background you have at the top behind your logo and put it there. It would add a little bit of depth to your site.
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Excellent



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Business Aspects
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I think this is very important. I know a lot of websites try to remain ad-free and they do it successfully. Here you have a site that could really use some ads to generate some revenue for yourself. You have a real great domain name that I'm sure will pick up a good Google Page Rank very soon. Maybe in the banner space at the bottom you can throw in some Google Adsense stuff. Even if you want to be ad-free, the ads at the bottom might be able to really generate some small income for you and you could use that to expand your site, hire more staff, or pay for the business costs of maintaining your site.

Also, I would be careful with copyright issues. I don't know where you are getting these games, wallpapers, and covers from. If you aren't creating them yourself, then be sure to follow copyright rules on other's sites. If a site says you can't use the games or images, don't get yourself in trouble. Sites like this can be successful, but always get the "okay" from the original creator of whatever you're using. You wouldn't want someone using your creations without authorization right? Again, I am NOT accusing you of anything here. Just a general thought on the business aspect of a website here. 🙂
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Good



Final Remarks
You really have something nice here. You appeal to a younger crowd with all three of your focuses and I think that's good. The young people are the ones that use computers and can go on Google and find your site. You're off to an amazing start and I feel really bad that I couldn't find anything I didn't like. Keep up the great work.​


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Thanks for the review, i will work on some of the points you have mentioned above, such as fixing the couple of words with missing Capital Letters. And work on the footer, this is kinda an on-going project.

Also i do have Adsense enabled? Maybe you were using Adblock to not see the ads? There arent alot, only at the header and in the sidebar of the homepage. And i use EGA on the Play Game pages in an attempt to gain a bit of revenue.

As for the wallpapers and timeline covers, MOST of the timeline covers i have made myself using either my imagination, or taking wallpapers, resizing them and adding other elements to them to make them a bit more unique. And the wallpapers i am careful as you suggest where i take and share them from. Same with posts in my blog, specifically the poetry section, i link back on every post where i found the original work.

As for some of the thumbnails looking kinda blurry, that is also something i have been working on as well, it was my mistake to not start doing this in the first place, but i have been working on making the thumbnails larger for when they are resized they look crisp

Again thanks for your feedback, i will also take your advice and work on the footer as well, i have been stumbling around with what i want to do with that section
 
besttimeline said:
Thanks for the review, i will work on some of the points you have mentioned above, such as fixing the couple of words with missing Capital Letters. And work on the footer, this is kinda an on-going project.

Also i do have Adsense enabled? Maybe you were using Adblock to not see the ads? There arent alot, only at the header and in the sidebar of the homepage. And i use EGA on the Play Game pages in an attempt to gain a bit of revenue.

As for the wallpapers and timeline covers, MOST of the timeline covers i have made myself using either my imagination, or taking wallpapers, resizing them and adding other elements to them to make them a bit more unique. And the wallpapers i am careful as you suggest where i take and share them from. Same with posts in my blog, specifically the poetry section, i link back on every post where i found the original work.

As for some of the thumbnails looking kinda blurry, that is also something i have been working on as well, it was my mistake to not start doing this in the first place, but i have been working on making the thumbnails larger for when they are resized they look crisp

Again thanks for your feedback, i will also take your advice and work on the footer as well, i have been stumbling around with what i want to do with that section

Thanks for some of the clarifications my man. 🙂

Best of luck!
 
I have taken your advice and changed the footer to match the header. And also made some subtle changes to the 'More' buttons using css. I also fixed the capital letters in the dropdown menus. I am considering changing the background as well, i am working on designing something
 
besttimeline said:
I have taken your advice and changed the footer to match the header. And also made some subtle changes to the 'More' buttons using css. I also fixed the capital letters in the dropdown menus. I am considering changing the background as well, i am working on designing something

Looks much better mate. 🙂
 
Thanks, now if only i can figure out the other issues i am having lol
 
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