How can I Improve This?

[AsunaSao]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DXt4NvY3O8g

Please give me thoughts and opinions. I have gotten stuff like turn down and music and get a better mic. If you agree with those comments say them again and also please note anything else you saw that could have been better. Thanks!

 

[Finn]

I moved this to Promotion Tricks and Help so that you can optimize your channel promotion to gain the greatest possible userbase.

Have a great day! 🙂

 

[sansa.stark]

You can use Video After Effect to handle this problem bro