How to improve this ad?

[Jason76]

Well, besides changing the picture. I'm thinking it needs more descriptions regarding the lessons. Also, maybe the bottom slogan isn't good - not sure.

 

[Jerlene]

How about something along the lines of, "All styles. No experience necessary."?

 

[Jon]

The image should tell your story, I'd definitely try and be a little more unique, but keep it modern and clean(to the point).

 

[Jason76]

It's actually going to a Facebook group first - and then the TheDrumLesson.com posts are on it. So is that lying?

 

[Dan The Man]

Needs a more compelling description and emojis.

 

[Jason76]

OK, I made a few changes

http://jointhedrumlesson.com - basically focusing more on "PDF and Sound Files" as the main attraction. Anyway, it's a bit more complex than this. For instance, the ad itself, on Facebook, not this one, might need more tweaking. Anyway. I'm now focusing on people I think will have more disposable income to become donators - but I've not forgotten the other ones - they still can be valuable members and maybe donators.

New ad:



OK, how can improve the FB ad and also my squeeze page I showed?

Ultimately, the goal is to get them to donate 1 or 5 dollars a month to https://www.patreon.com/thedrumlesson