KH-3 Review

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Name of Forum: KH-3 (kingdom hearts 3)
Forum Link: http://kh-3.com/forums
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Date Forum Opened: few weeks ago
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jrd9p3.webpPros:
-I think that it's great that you have at least one topic in each forum ( it can make your forum look more active than it really is to potential guests. And it's just good in general to have at least one thing that a user could read in each, it could provide as an example to users as to what kind of topics belong in that forum).

-I couldn't find any spelling or grammar mistakes on the forum index -- nice job on that.

-Each forum you currently have up, has a description. Every description is a nice length and has no spelling or grammar errors that I can detect.

-You have a great domain; it's so short yet relevant.

21agta9.webpCons:
-You need a favicon. You don't have any favicon on at all right now (not even a default one), which is bad because it means that when someone bookmarks your site, the bookmark (your forum) won't stand out even a little against their other bookmarks that do have a favicon.

-I really like your banner, but I believe that the sub text is a bit hard to read. Granted, my eyes are not the best, but perhaps spacing out the letters or choosing a similar but more clear font would be helpful to some?

-In regards to the title - "KH-3.com, #1 site for Kingdom Hearts 3 News" - why is "news" capitalized? I'm assuming the name of the game that your forum is about isn't called "Kingdom Hearts 3 News". If it is called that, then ignore this point, but if it is not then I would suggest that you either make the 'n' in news lower-case or make the 'S' in 'site' capitalized and the 'F' in 'for' capitalized. Basically, you should either have all the beginning letters capitalized or none* capitalized.
*With the exception of proper nouns.

-In the staff needed topic there is this text -
"Hey, KH-3.com is looking for writers for the main site(kh-3.com)

If you got the job you would be expected to:
Write news articles whenever KH related announcements appear(ALWAYS CITE THE SOURCE)
Write summarys(and possibly character bios) for all games.
Keep the main site updated.

Knowledge you need:
Some HTML
Good Grammar and writing skills.

If you're interested in becoming part of the team please post here or send me a PM."
The things that I've bolded are spelling or some other typo I've found.
The first bold - Always put a space after the word, then put parentheses.
The second bold - "got" should be either receive or get.
The third bold - Don't type in all caps in important threads. It makes your seem like you're yelling -- not getting a point across. Use bold or underline.
The fourth bold - it should be "summarys'"
That's the only major topic I checked, so I don't know if there's similar mistakes in other topics. I would recommend you type your topics in some sort of spell checker before typing them, and go through the other topics you've made and check them.



13yh2c5.webpFinal/General Thoughts:

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What was most liked about the website/forums:
The domain.
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What was disliked most about the website/forums: The lack of a favicon.

Final Score : 6


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