Mario Siggy

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C&C?
 
The good:
All I really like is the text and the border.


The so-so/bad:
Looks like you just splattered some C4D's onto a canvas and added Mario+Text. Try work on making effects blend better.
All the effects pull you away from the focal which makes it look messy. Use a sense of flow that works well with the sig.
The lighting isn't consistent as if you added lighting at randomly placed spots. So make just one or two light sources and the other lights darker. A couple gradient maps wouldn't hurt either.
Putting effects over Mario's face was a bad idea and it makes it look unclean. Just erase the part of the effects that cover up Mario's face and it will be nice and clean.

Keep practicing and you'll be great.
 
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