My Revised Design

[P8I.com]

Looking for some critiques and any advice on how I can improve my redesigned site:

http://p8i.com/juscakesdemo/juscakenew.png

By the way, the background image will change every 10 seconds or so.

Original:
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[Jake]

Add a period to 'Enjoy'.

 

[AndroidOS]

Other than what Jake said, I think it is a great looking theme. I do find it more natural to have the menu on the right, but that's just me.

 

[LiquidServe]

Looks great! If you haven't done it yet, make it responsive too. Would be awesome! 😀

 

[Jordan]

I like it much better then then original 😛

 

[P8I.com]

@Jake

K.

@AndroidOS

Thank you.

@LiquidServe

Yeah, you're right. It wouldn't be that hard to do, either. I could have the menu move below the 'delectable blah blah' text and then have it expand to the width of the mobile device.

@JordanH

I'm glad. That original design I did sucked. Don't know how I didn't see that at first.

 

[juststeven]

I looked at the actual demo. 😛 Its nice but you should move the logo up and left. 😉