Natural disasters - My poem.

[Grumpy]

Here is one I wrote earlier, only took me 10-15 minutes so as you can imagine it isn't the best:

Natural disasters,
News casters,
Reporting on life's great ba**ards.

It's really not easy,
To feel free,
In a World where lives are full with Poverty.

Donating,
Migrating,
To a life which you can't help hating.

Tokyo, Christchurch,
People just trying to search,
For friends, for family,
All a part of God's great fatality.

* To be rapped.

All criticism welcome. 🙂

 

[Taz]

Here is one I wrote earlier, only took me 10-15 minutes so as you can imagine it isn't the best:

Natural disasters,
News casters,
Reporting on life's great ba**ards.

It's really not easy,
To feel free,
In a World where lives are full with Poverty.

Donating,
Migrating,
To a life which you can't help hating.

Tokyo, Christchurch,
People just trying to search,
For friends, for family,
All a part of God's great fatality.

* To be rapped.

All criticism welcome. 🙂

You should change that line.

 

[Mr.Hazey]

He means great as in big Taz 😉

 

[Taz]

Wait what?

 

[InfiniteJest]

Not feelin' it

 

[Tindris]

Bit different...

 

[Mr. Duck]

i like it 🙂

 

[kssite]

cool stuff