Optimus Vault

@The Joker

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Novice Review of Optimus Vault
http://optimusvault.co.nz/
Review by Grimalkin


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Site Structure:
The way your site is structured, it's easily laid out where I can find everything. That is always one of my main concerns...being able to easily navigate enough to find what I'm looking for. I would make the title of your site (Optimus Vault) a little bit more prominent than that and make it stand out more. Right now, it doesn't stand out enough from the rest of the text in the main page. It also helps that you have that little "About Me" posted front and center. That will help tell people what your site is all about. The one thing I would change about the "About Me" is the purple text. It hurts my eyes trying to read that against the white background. If you want to use a different color than the rest of the text, I would use a different color, like the blue in the text that direct you to the other pages of your site (like "Diary", "My Resume", "Advocating", etc.).



Thing you liked best about forum: Easy to navigate around the site.
Thing you liked least about forum: I'm not really fond of the purple text against that white background.



I like the idea of your site and I can see it being beneficial to many people. Being dedicated to your site is what's going to help it move along and become a great site. I wish you and your site all the best in the future!​
 
I've changed it all to Green now. I've added a header background color and made the top bar background a little lighter than the header background color.

Also changed H1 and H2 tags to Green as well.

Thanks for the review.
 
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