PettoPost
Review by Princess Allena
Design Quality
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When I first opened the tab to look at the blog, the theme seemed to hurt my eyes a little. The bright white and the black colors put a strain on them. I recommend toning down the white to maybe a light grey? Example: #E6E6E6
That color is still a little bright if you wanted it that way but it is more easy on the eyes. It would also blend well with the theme since black and grey go together. I have one more suggestion and that is to make your logo a little bit bigger and to center it. Right now it isn't very big and it doesn't stand out very well on the front page.
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Good
Spelling & Professionalism
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While reading a few of the blog posts, there are a quite a few spelling and grammatical errors that I am seeing. For example, here are a few on
this post. In the following sentence, you put "at" and it should be "as". I have underlined the word that I am talking about.
The i10 Power Series Lightning Cable is a 6 foot long cable, nearly twice as long at the standard Apple manufactured lighting cable.
On that same post, there are two more spelling issues I found.
It should be "Over time" and "decreasing". I really want the article writers to focus on proof reading the articles two or three times before posting. It is easy to make those spelling errors so you
have to read over it a few times to make for certain you catch all of them.
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Very Poor
Originality
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The theme that this website is using looks like it is familiar to me. If you do like I said above with editing the colors, though, it will make it a little different than the others and it will also help with the strain on peoples eyes. Everything that I am reading sounds original. Overall, the website looks pretty original to me. Like I said, there are a few things that could be changed to make it more unique/original.
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Good
Final Remarks
I can tell a lot of time was put into making this website and creating articles. I love it when I can see the time put into things and when people know what they are doing and they actually care about making people like things. I wish you lots of luck in the future with PettoPost!
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