[Poem] Bitter Cold

[Zaborg]

I'm going to share a poem I wrote recently. I've written 2 poems in my life, this is my 2nd one. Thanks for reading!

Here is my first poem: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=76839 .

 

[Poopy Head]

Good job Zaborg, very intriguing. :O I would like it better if it rhymed just a little bit more, though. 😉

 

[Zaborg]

Ye it's my 2nd poem ever and actually I don't pay much attention on the rhythm, all poems doesn't have to sound the same.

 

[Deleted member 7467]

Mind sharing the story behind this?

 

[Zaborg]

Mind sharing the story behind this?

There is no story. Got inspired by the cold weather we had, it was so cold God damn!

 

[Poopy Head]

Now when I re-read it and think about it, it's actually pretty catchy, I could probably make a rap out of it or something. 😛

 

[Fiona1964]

I really like this
I hope you carry on writing

 

[Zaborg]

Thanks! I will probably not continue writing, I think I'm so bad at it.

 

[juststeven]

It's pretty good 🙂 It's got depth to it. It's a poem you have dissect to fully understand which is good.