Poster - Need quick feedback

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Here is a advertisement poster i did for my project. It is to advertise our food product which is cookies i just wipe up something simple as shown below. Please CNC! The image is re-sized.
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umm for me the text is going much more than necessary and the white text is stealing all the focus from the cookies.
 
It's quite awesome , And tbh , I don't agree with ashish , I like the way the white text which says "Eat the best Chip Chocolate Cookies" , Yerp , I think You should've added the Chocolate on the left , and Chip on the right instead. Ask me , It's awesome , brilliant work 😉
 
Make the black text fade out to the edge.
 
I like the concept, I don't understand why the word Chip has 3 s's though? The cookies could look more appealing but over all it's very nicely done 😉
 
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