Name of Site: UddinSports Site Genre: Sports Site URL:http://uddinsports.com Type of Review (Full/Quick/Questionnaire): Quick Opening Date: 2-3 months ago. Additional Notes: N/A
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Honestly, I think your site looks disgusting. First of all, you didn't even bother to get a favicon for the website, one of the easiest things to get a hold of. Kindle does fantastic favicons for $100 FP Cash if you can't do them yourself. Now onto the actual website, the navigation bar at the top looks horrible and makes me want to vomit, the search bar looks even worse, you can hardly even see the magnifier icon on the right of the search bar and the text isn't the easiest to read either. For the background, I'm not even sure what's going on when the gradient looks dies out and then meets a solid block of white. In my eyes, you must look for another theme.
Content
When you requested this review, you stated that the website had been open for around 2-3 months. Considering that you cover 4 massively popular sports and then College Sports, I'd expect you to have a lot more content over the course of those 2-3 months. From what I've seen, when I've clicked "all" to view all articles on all sports, you have posted around 13 articles. I've seen blogs that in about 3 months have posted a lot more than that, why would people come and check up on your blog if they can get a sports blog that will post a lot more frequently? You should have done a lot better than 13 articles by now. Additionally, some of your articles are as little as 3 small bullet points and two lines of text. If I saw a blog that had articles like that, I'd never want to come back and I'd think that the blogger him/herself didn't care about their own blog.
Grammar/Spelling
When you're writing an article to contribute to a blog, I'd expect you to at least check through your work to make sure that there aren't any grammar/spelling mistakes, or at least, check to see that there aren't any obvious grammar/spelling mistakes. To me, it looks as if you haven't done that because when I was reading through the titles of your articles I saw this mistake that was too obvious, "How Denver beat the Chargers?". The title, of all things, would be the hardest to make a mistake on - but it was actually managed by you. In the very same article, you wrote, "Some are asking how the Broncos have been the up and coming San Diego Chargers", I'm sure that this should have been "beat" instead of "been" and "upcoming" instead of "up and coming". Once again, you haven't checked over your work, I advise that you start doing so.
Final Remarks:
Your blog has plenty of potential, I'm sure. I didn't put any strengths because I didn't believe there were any, if I were to write something that I thought was strong about your blog I'd have had to make some unbelievable rubbish that would be a complete lie and of no benefit to you at all. Instead, I have provided you with some, hopefully, constructive criticism that will help you to improve your site.
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