Review my song...

[gqgk]

Here is a section of a song i made... let me know what you think.its nothing final or anything. but some suggestions would be cool

 

[gqgk]

o yeah. btw it was made using garageband

 

[Rok]

That's an awesome song but way too short. Love it. 😀

 

[birdy]

A little short but sounded good -🙂-

 

[gqgk]

thanks. its just a sample to see if i like the style and if i do i'll make the full song and everything. but just that took like an hour to get the effects perfect so i figured i might as well check that before i get too deep

 

[Runestyle]

I thought you were going to have vocals, you could do a good alternative new rock sound to it. like the spill canvas, etc.

 

[Fullmoon]

I think you could have made the sample abit longer. But i liked what I heard

 

[gqgk]

ok. i'll add to it and make a new topic when its like 2 min long

 

[Lee Lawson]

Nice for your first song.
Add an introductory verse and then take it to the drums and base guitar and use the music you got now as the background.