school digital project! comments needed!

[50Cent]

I needed comments on my this work. Like the position of the images and etc.. Thanks!

http://i46.tinypic.com/dxh7o8.png

 

[Raymond]

All it is a bunch of renders inserted into a black background.. so 1/10

 

[SheepishWolf]

I like it, nice job, But the background could be a little better.

 

[Jabberwocky]

It doesn't look that good. It all goes into each other.