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Nice background, has a good effect on the theme, which is simple, which I like. Navigation is great. I see no grammar mistakes in your articles and there nice and long, with lots of information. Nothing negative to say.
 

Offerscript
Review by John123 ​

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First Impressions
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My first impressions of Offerscript were good. Everything looks in place and the site looks professional and inviting. I would try to make exactly what you're selling more obvious on the homepage. If a user is just "strolling by" they likely will not venture off onto other pages just for more information on your product. You should make more exact details about your product on your homepage. That would increase profits for your script because a user would know more detail about your site, faster.
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Good


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Design Quality
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You need a better logo. Your current one is not noticeable against your current theme. It took me a minute to realize that the text reading "Offerscript Bringing GPT to the masses." was your logo. Your need something that "stands out" more. Instead of completely blending in with your theme.

The white against the blue backdrop in your navigation bar where it says "GPT SCRIPTS
OFFERSCRIPT TUTORIALS PRIZE/REWARD SCRIPTS UNCATEGORIZED WEB MARKETING" is somewhat hard to read. The white against the blue background look fuzzy on a small computer monitor. The text is also a bit small. You should either make the text larger or add a color that stands out more on the blue background to make the text easier to read. I would recommend changing the white text to something bolder and easier to read, opposed to changing the size of the text.
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Average


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Site Structure
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The navigation of your site is very easy. I can find my way around with no problems.

Until you post more articles, you should remove the navigation bar at the header of the page. You don't have sufficient content to warrant a navigation bar at this time. You should remove it for now, then add it back when you have a multitude of articles covering everything on your navigation bar. That would help make your site look like it has more articles if you put everything on the homepage because someone who is curious in that specific area will not see a empty category.
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Average



Final Remarks​
Right now you have a professional site and a unique script. If you post on your blog some more and stick with the project, you should have no problems finding success. Best of luck!​

Your Score​
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John123 said:

Offerscript
Review by John123 ​

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First Impressions
[note]========== BEGIN - First Impressions ==========[/note]
My first impressions of Offerscript were good. Everything looks in place and the site looks professional and inviting. I would try to make exactly what you're selling more obvious on the homepage. If a user is just "strolling by" they likely will not venture off onto other pages just for more information on your product. You should make more exact details about your product on your homepage. That would increase profits for your script because a user would know more detail about your site, faster.
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Good


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Design Quality
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You need a better logo. Your current one is not noticeable against your current theme. It took me a minute to realize that the text reading "Offerscript Bringing GPT to the masses." was your logo. Your need something that "stands out" more. Instead of completely blending in with your theme.

The white against the blue backdrop in your navigation bar where it says "GPT SCRIPTS
OFFERSCRIPT TUTORIALS PRIZE/REWARD SCRIPTS UNCATEGORIZED WEB MARKETING" is somewhat hard to read. The white against the blue background look fuzzy on a small computer monitor. The text is also a bit small. You should either make the text larger or add a color that stands out more on the blue background to make the text easier to read. I would recommend changing the white text to something bolder and easier to read, opposed to changing the size of the text.
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Average


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Site Structure
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The navigation of your site is very easy. I can find my way around with no problems.

Until you post more articles, you should remove the navigation bar at the header of the page. You don't have sufficient content to warrant a navigation bar at this time. You should remove it for now, then add it back when you have a multitude of articles covering everything on your navigation bar. That would help make your site look like it has more articles if you put everything on the homepage because someone who is curious in that specific area will not see a empty category.
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Average



Final Remarks​
Right now you have a professional site and a unique script. If you post on your blog some more and stick with the project, you should have no problems finding success. Best of luck!​

Your Score​
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I will take your critique into consideration. BTW, "Bringing GPT to the masses" is the slogan, and Offerscript is the logo. Also I don't see where you got that it is paid script. as it says quite clearly it is a free script. the bottom navigation i can understand with removal.
 
Site looks really good!

I like how you are using bright colors, layout looks very professional, although I would try getting a good logo made.
 
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I like the look of your website/blog, its nice and clean. Not much to say really as the content is good too. One thing I would do is add links to the twitter button on the header and an email or maybe remove those if you don't have one
 
I honestly like everything but the color of the theme, it just doesn't match your dark blue background you have going on.

I would suggest changing your light blue into a color that matches your theme, such as: #1F5458

I changed the navbar to see what it would look like:

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It matches more in my opinion. ^.^ Other than that I like the site! Good luck with it. 🙂
 
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