What do you think about this youtube commentary?

[GSquadron]

I made a video commentary and was eager to know if you like it or not, or give any suggestions.
Is it an ok quality? Btw, the video quality is not max because I converted the video 3 times accidentally and I will add 1080p gameplay next time, so I am just asking about the audio.

[youtube]pTDYRXStgQA[/youtube]

 

[GSquadron]

Any ideas?

 

[GSquadron]

Still waiting to read an idea.

 

[Soapbox]

I think it's a little bit too much. It's funny in places, but it may benefit more if you leave more spaces in there, so people can have more chance to absorb the atmosphere. I think that's a polish accent, correct?