What do you think of my poem?

[Babelle]

Winters Reign

Throne of ice, misty blue
Crown of frost, snow, and sleet
Living mirror of glass and silence
Blanket of frozen tears.

Air tastes of peppermint, a shiver
The wind bites and screams
Curses from sharp icy gleam
A fountain in every piercing thought.

The Winter King stands to reign
His eyes of blazing snowstorms
The scent of sparkling crystals
His skin bitter of blazing silver.

The Ice Palace appears with delicacy
A sculpture of stars moulded forever
To breathe away ice and frost at the end
For snowdrops come to mourn Winter.


I entered this in a few competitions. What do you think?

 

[Carson]

It's a really well written poem, however the topic of Winter is a little bit bland.

 

[Babelle]

Thanks for the comment.. How do you mean bland? As in used too much, or a boring poem? It's actually about the Winter King.

 

[Robi]

Bland means its plain and boring but I disagree winters reign goes well with the meaning of the poem

well done.

 

[Babelle]

Thanks for the compliment 😀

Any other comments?

 

[crazymum]

That is really lovely.I enjoyed reading it

 

[Babelle]

Thank you for the comment 😀

 

[crazymum]

You are more than welcome daisy it is really lovely

 

[Babelle]

Thanks again gemmk1, +1 rep 😉